I am learning to add some details to my writing.
Lolly the Whale
In
the deep blue sea Lolly woke up in the morning. She got some food out of the
fridge. After Lolly went to the hospital because Lolly had a baby whale. In the
afternoon the baby whale came out of the hospital. Lolly called her baby whale
Polly. They lived happily ever after.
I like trying to add detail to my story. It is easy for me because I have a good imagination.
